28th July 2017 — Logan
CREATIVE WRITING
Ideas:
war… control… discipline (perfect)… military regime… fear from government/military…
based in a camp (military camp, concentration camp, migrant camp)??… setting is clean but dirty, dry (desert) brown rough landscape… low level (1 story buildings) made from mud brick, barbed wire, fences,
Right, Logan – time to actually write something. You only have 5 periods to do this in now.
4 periods to go…so time to get motoring, Logan
Logan,
It is disappointing that you have decided not to attempt this task.
Ms Bagley